I think the word that describes me as a friend is helpful. I choice it because i always help them get out out of superbad things. Like when they do something in class i try to get them out of it. some time they dont care until they are in truble. Onedaythey will see that im not going to be there for them. Thats why i am super helpful.
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Hey Trenton. You did a good job of giving details that explain why you are helpful. Instead of referring to your friends as "them," say "my friends." You are also being very vague with the things you do- can you remember any specific events? Can you think of a hook? Don't forget to capitalize I! Nice work.
:) lol..Hey..well yea you are hellpfull you do help me out a lo...!!! well comment you latter cuz we gotta go..lol..nice job...!!!!
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that piece was alright. I think that you need to work on spelling
TRENTON you did good on this friend prompt keep the good work up
ilike your piece and how you explained how your helpful.
this prompt is ballin .Holla back on my blog
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